Iambic Pentameter Poem?
October 30, 2007 – 10:43 pmI hit to indite a sonnet/couplet poem abstract most a “pilgramage”/ourself. i somewhat see Iambic Pentameter, but on the innocuous side, I poverty another opinons.
any advice? She SITS on DOWN the CURB, so FAINT and LOST She KNOWS she CANT indite WELL as ROBert FROST She HOPES to FIND her TRUE consciousness AS she THINKS But THEN, she SEES whatever ONE who MAKES her SINK who WRECK her CHANCE of KNOWing WHO she IS BeCAUSE they DON’T underSTAND same she SAYS She IS on WAY to FIND her SELF same SOME But IS aFRAID of WHO she WILL beCOME A TRIP to PERfect TOWNS module HELP discover LOTS But THERE is NO much THING in LANDS by GOD
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line 1: She SITS down ON the CURB line 6: (should have the rhythm /) line 7: rewrite, she's ON her WAY to FIND herSELF like SOME
By Ronnie on Oct 30, 2007